On Fri, May 18, 2018 at 05:30:09PM +0100, Grant Likely wrote:
On 18/05/2018 16:39, Daniel Thompson wrote:
On Fri, May 18, 2018 at 02:06:10PM +0100, Grant Likely wrote:
Scope doesn't need it's own chapter. Move it into the 'About This Document' chapter. Also expand the text to place this document in relation to the existing SBBR document. SBBR is the stricter of the two, so EBBR can be considered a superset. (ie. all SBBR compliant platforms are also EBBR compliant, but the converse is not true).
Signed-off-by: Grant Likely grant.likely@arm.com
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diff --git a/source/ebbr.rst b/source/ebbr.rst index 858bd01..700feba 100644 --- a/source/ebbr.rst +++ b/source/ebbr.rst @@ -40,8 +40,29 @@ It leverages the prevalent industry standard firmware specifications of UEFI. Comments or change requests can be sent to arm.ebbr-discuss@arm.com. +Scope +===== +This document defines the boot and runtime services that are expected by an +Operating System or hypervisor, for an ARM embedded device, which follows the
nit: Isn't Arm title cased these days?
Cut and paste of existing text. I'll do a separate patch to sweep out the old usage.
Ok.
+UEFI specification.
+This specification defines the boot and runtime services for a physical system, +including services that are required for virtualization. +It does not define a standardized abstract virtual machine view for a Guest +Operating System.
+This specification is similar to the Arm Server Base Boot Requirements +specification[SBBR_] in that it defines the firmware interface presented to an +operating system, with SBBR having stricter requirements than EBBR. EBBR
Perhaps another nit but it would be good to say who the stricter requirements apply to (reducing requirements on firmware typically implies increasing requirements on the OS).
How about:
With SBBR having stricter requirements on hardware and firmware than EBBR.
Yes. Like this. As changed: Reviewed-by: Daniel Thompson daniel.thompson@linaro.org
Daniel.